| Mom, daughter, me, daughter, 1993 |
My mother’s very slight country-twanged voice;
My father pestering me to read Joyce;
Creating Spirograph patterns for hours;
The blissfulness of steamy hot showers;
Playing Battleship and Clue with my friends
And Pink Panther cartoons on the weekends.
Visiting the zoo to check out the snakes;
New pink erasers waiting for mistakes;
New pink erasers waiting for mistakes;
Frosting a cake with swirls of buttercream;
Discovering Bobby’s death was a dream;
Romance novels full of intrigue and spice;
Sushi made with avocado and rice;
Apple and cinnamon scents of the fall;
James Bond adventures that held me in thrall;
Warm fluffy towels straight out of the dryer;
Melted marshmallows crisp-blackened in fire;
Soft little mews waking me from a nap;
Kitties who purr while curled up in my lap;
Wriggling my toes in a new pair of boots;
Countertop bowl full of fresh summer fruits:
Peaches and mangoes and cherries galore;
And sunbeams gleaming upon a wood floor.
Knickknacks set at right angles so neatly;
(Secrets stashed in my posts quite discreetly);
Nixing my past from the Wayback Machine;
Keeping my conscience and kitchen pristine;
My OCD may take weird contortions —
Counting spaghetti, measuring portions.
My grandmother did, so what can I say?
I love that I get to blame DNA.
More than these I love my daughters and grands,
While sadly aware of decreasing sands.
All these have been my loves.
~*~
Written for dVerse Poets Pub. The inspirational poem is “The Great Lover” by Rupert Brooks, which was written in rhyming couplets, so that’s how I wrote mine (except for the required first and last lines), even though I know that rhyming is out of style.
I enjoyed that! Well done! And I'm now singing "These are a few of my favorite things". Because inspiration.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I am looking forward to yours! 😀
Delete"Secrets stashed in my posts quite discreetly" Do talk! LOL. - N
ReplyDeleteHehe, usually my fiction is more revealing, shhhh!
DeleteWow, brilliant list
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by my blog, Paula
Much love
Thanks Gillena!
DeletePaula, your list is long and lovely .. I feel as though I've known you for decades. Brava ~ Great job!
ReplyDeleteAww thank you!
DeleteI love that you put your ‘mother’s very slight country-twanged voice’ and your father pestering you to read Joyce at the top of your list Paula. I used to create Spirograph patterns for hours too – now I enjoy mindfulness colouring. This is such a comprehensive list, and I like the rhyming couplets. I especially enjoyed the appeals to smell and taste: the cake with swirls of buttercream; sushi made with avocado and rice; apple and cinnamon scents; and delicious ‘peaches and mangoes and cherries galore’.
ReplyDeleteI’m so glad you liked it, Kim!
DeleteI love that you chose rhyming couplets for your most excellent list, Paula, - favourite lines
ReplyDelete"My OCD may take weird contortions —
Counting spaghetti, measuring portions.
My grandmother did, so what can I say?
I love that I get to blame DNA."
Thanks so much!!
DeleteI actually love this a lot, the childhood and then the part about blaming DNA... as someone diagnosed with something, not OCD but something else, I was actually like: AHA, I too can blame DNA...
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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